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Growing Old With You 1/?

TITLE: Growing Old With You (based from Adam Sandler's song) 1/?
AUTHOR: twistedoodles 
PAIRING: Ryden (ofcourse!)
POV: 3rd
DISCLAIMER: I own no one. This story is something that happened only in my imagination. And maybe in yours too. *shrugs*
BETA: a friend who isn't in LJ :|
“Mom, this is my girlfriend. Isn’t he pretty?” Brendon grinned.

My attempt at a kid!fic. <3 :)


“Mommy, I want you to meet my girlfriend.”

4-year old Brendon said as he tugged at his mother’s skirt for the third time. His dark brown hair, round chocolate eyes and cute pouty lips made him the perfect example for adorable.

He is.


And the way he is jutting his bottom lip forward could just about give him anything he wants from anyone he asks. But apparently, his mother was immune.

“Honey, I’m talking with Ms. Asher. Wait, okay.”

Brendon pouts some more and this time, his teacher, Ms. Victoria Asher, notices.

“Mrs. Urie, it’s fine. You can go attend to Brendon. We can talk about this later or some other time if you’d like.” She says. She gives her a sincere smile and goes to tend to the new parent who arrived to pick up their child.

Mrs. Urie kneels down in front of Brendon and sighs. Now that he has his mother’s attention back, he grins from ear to ear and starts jumping up and down. Yes, little Brendon is just a bouncing ball of energy.

“So what were you saying young man? Girlfriend, eh?”

Brendon nods and smiles even wider.

“Okay then, let’s meet her.” His mom smiles and stands up. Brendon takes her hand and starts leading her to the corner of the room where their reading books are found. He stops when they have reached their mini library and let go of his mother’s hand to approach the small kid at the corner who was busy reading. He looked up when Brendon stopped in front of him.


The kid blinked. Brendon reached his hand out and the other took it. He dragged the kid to his mom. Or more like he bounced his way to his mom while dragging his “girlfriend” along.

“Mom, this is my girlfriend. Isn’t he pretty?” Brendon grinned.


Brendon nudged his girlfriend startling him. “Hi.” the kid mumbled.


A/N: Hope it didn't suck much. I'm new to this whole writing stories thing. It easier to write plots but writing their story is whole different thing. Ha ha. So this is my 2nd shot at fan fiction.

Continue? ...or not?

BETA: found! Thanks again, helloglasgow . :)


( 35 comments — Leave a comment )
Dec. 29th, 2009 06:02 pm (UTC)
First of all, thank you so much for posting this. Finally something new for my com :D

This is lovely and absolutely cute. Cannot wait for more :D
Dec. 29th, 2009 06:04 pm (UTC)
No problem. :)
I finished chapter 2 already. Maybe I'll post it tomorrow.
Dec. 29th, 2009 10:14 pm (UTC)
So so cute <3 I can't wait for the more!

It's definitely something new :) I like it.
Dec. 30th, 2009 02:24 am (UTC)
Thankyou thankyou! I'm gon update later. Watch out for that. :)
Dec. 29th, 2009 10:39 pm (UTC)
This was so cute!! I love Kid!Fics, I can just imagine Bden being all crazy and running around and being that adorable little boy you always see shopping and you kinda want to steal him cause he's so cute. In a strictly non-paedopheolic way..

I'm always open for beta-ing, I don't tend to write much, but I'm good with grammar and spelling errors, so hit me up if you're desperate.
Dec. 30th, 2009 02:31 am (UTC)
Thank you thank you! :)

Oh, and I get you. Totally. In that non-creepy-person-who-likes-likes-kids way. Yeah. Haha.
Dec. 29th, 2009 10:41 pm (UTC)
now that we all know brendon thinks ryan's a girl........this is cute<3
Dec. 30th, 2009 02:26 am (UTC)
haha. Thaaank you :)
Dec. 29th, 2009 11:33 pm (UTC)
That was just the most adorable thing I've ever read! You should definatly continue! And I love you're writting, it's great, and you didn't have any gramatical issues like I've seen so much of on here... I love it!!!! <3
Dec. 30th, 2009 02:28 am (UTC)
Thaaanks! :)
Hope you watch out for the update! I'm gon post it later today.
Dec. 30th, 2009 12:58 am (UTC)
Haha Ryan is a girlfriend. This is cute u should really continue
Dec. 30th, 2009 02:28 am (UTC)
He is. haha. Thanks! :)
Dec. 30th, 2009 01:32 am (UTC)
I know other people have said this, but ill beta if you need it... ive been looking for something to do!
Dec. 30th, 2009 02:33 am (UTC)
Thanks for reading! :)

Hey, I appreciate the offer. And it really hate that I have to choose but since helloglasgow offered first, I'm gon take up hers first. Hope you understand. Next time tho, maybe you could? If the offer still stands that is.
Dec. 30th, 2009 02:55 am (UTC)
no, totally its cool! if you ever need anything, feel free to ask! =)
Dec. 30th, 2009 03:00 am (UTC)
Thank you thank you! :D
Dec. 30th, 2009 02:52 am (UTC)
That's really cute, more? :D
Dec. 30th, 2009 03:01 am (UTC)
Thanks for reading!

Yes, later. I'm just waiting for my beta. But I'm done with Chapter 2. :)
Dec. 30th, 2009 04:02 am (UTC)
i can be your beta ;)
subject says it all. all you actually had to do is ask. hahaha. :P

guess who
Dec. 30th, 2009 04:06 am (UTC)
Re: i can be your beta ;)
hahaha dude. there's nothing green in this story. or yeah, nothing...yet. =)) kidd!
Dec. 30th, 2009 04:10 am (UTC)
Re: i can be your beta ;)
Sucks man. I can't even send you a message. In private ata or something. Pfft. :))
Dec. 30th, 2009 04:42 am (UTC)
hehe... this made me smile. like ^________________^

The moment it was mentioned that the 'girlfriend' is in the mini library... no, when it was said that Brendon has a girlfriend, I knew it was Ryan! XD I love kid fics and it looks like I'll be watching out for this! :D

oh, and it didn't suck at all. :)
Dec. 30th, 2009 04:50 am (UTC)
Thanks! :)

Haha. And ofcourse, Bden's gf will no doubt be Ryan. Kid fics for the win! <3
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Dec. 30th, 2009 07:11 am (UTC)
Hahaha. The 2nd chapter's up. But it hasn't been checked by any beta yet so I haven't posted it in anywhere. :)

I'm glad you liked it. I'm actually writing the 5th chapter now.

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Dec. 30th, 2009 07:13 am (UTC)
It's fine. I know the feeling. Haha. Chapter 2's up. :)
Dec. 30th, 2009 02:43 pm (UTC)
This made my heart swell with so much happiness and just gahhh. ♥
Dec. 30th, 2009 02:45 pm (UTC)
Thaaaanks! >:D<
If you're not particular if it's beta-ed or not, you could go read 'til the 5th now. Haha. Glad you liked it! :)
Dec. 30th, 2009 10:48 pm (UTC)
That was so cute. <3
I can just imagine Brendon afterward talking to his mom all, "Why can't boys be girlfriends?"
I can't wait for more. <3
Dec. 30th, 2009 10:52 pm (UTC)
Haha. Well, it was something along the lines of that. Kind of.

Thanks for reading and I'm glad you enjoyed :)
Some chapters are up already.
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Dec. 31st, 2009 05:56 pm (UTC)
Yes :)
Up to the 5th. Haven't started on the 6th yet. Haha.
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Dec. 31st, 2009 06:01 pm (UTC)
Thanks! <3

Happy New Year!
I'll try to start writing in the morning.
Jan. 1st, 2010 08:32 am (UTC)
you better continue this, pronto!
Jan. 1st, 2010 12:53 pm (UTC)
Thanks for reading this! <3 :)

About the continuing part...heh, well...I'm still thinking of what to put in the 6th. Haha. School starts on the 4th so I'm kind of cramming with the things I have to submit next week. Hope I can squeeze in writing more updates. :| *fingers crossed*
Jan. 1st, 2010 10:45 am (UTC)
hahaha that was so adorable please continuer!! :)
Jan. 1st, 2010 12:54 pm (UTC)
Re: :)
Thanks for reading! <3 :)

Ooh...The 5th is up!
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