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Growing Old With You 2/?

TITLE: Growing Old With You (based from Adam Sandler's song) 2/?
AUTHOR:twistedoodles  
RATING: G
PAIRING: Ryden (ofcourse!)
POV: 3rd
DISCLAIMER: I own no one. This story is something that happened only in my imagination. And maybe in yours too. *shrugs*
BETA: helloglasgow 
SUMMARY:

“That is not how you’re supposed to greet your husband home!” he whines and stomps his foot for effect.

NOTES: Thank you for all your wonderful comments. I've decided that this is just some kind of prequel to a more 'mature' story that I will be co-writing with rigz95 . But honestly, it's fun writing kid!fics. I can totally see them in my head - all cute and cuddly and just plain adorable. Love, love, love.


<3


“Hi,” Brendon’s girlfriend mumbled.

Brendon’s mom kneeled in front of the kid whose hand he’s been gripping tightly. “Brendon, sweetie, I think you’re hurting him.” The kid shakes his head. Brendon beams.

“I won’t hurt him mom. He’s my girlfriend,” he says sternly while his cute brows knit together.

The kid has his head bowed but he seems to be listening to Brendon and his mom’s conversation.

Mrs. Urie sighs but then says, "I’m Grace. Brendon’s mom.” She holds out his hand to him and he hesitantly grips it with his other tiny hand that wasn’t holding Brendon’s.

“Ryan,” he says quietly, almost a whisper.

“Are you really Brendon’s girlfriend?” Then she turns to Brendon. “Brenny boy, Ryan’s not a girl.”

Brendon pouts and hugs Ryan. “I know but he’s pretty. Girls are pretty. I like pretty but I like Ryan even more!” He lets go of Ryan for a moment and starts doing this frantic big movements with his tiny arms.

Ryan blushes and ducks his head. Brendon’s mom pats his head and says, “Sorry if Brendon keeps calling you his girlfriend. I’ll tell him to stop, okay? Don’t worry.”

“No. It’s okay,” he says…or more like whispers.

“MOM! You can’t take him away from me! Neverrrrrrrrrrrrr!” He draws out the R’s and scowls at his mother. He again hugs Ryan and moves back a few steps bringing him along.

Mrs. Urie sighs defeated and nods. “Fine. I’ll see you later. Be good you two.” She smiles a little at the both of them and walks away.

--

The following day...

It was almost time for their break and somehow, they’ve managed to play dolls, doctor and a little bit of house. Oops, no. They still are playing house.

“Honey, I’m home!” Brendon says as he enters their makeshift house in the reading area.

Ryan looks up from the book he was reading and nods. Brendon pouts and stands in front of Ryan with his hands on his hips. Ryan looks up and puts his book aside.

“That is not how you’re supposed to greet your husband home!” he whines and stomps his foot for effect.

Ryan just rolls his eyes and picks his book back up.

“Ryyyyyyyyyyyyy!”

Nothing.

Brendon kneels in front of Ryan with his best puppy dog pout with matching quivering lips.

Ryan raises his brow but doesn’t look up. This gets Brendon frustrated and he almost cries but stops himself. Instead, he stands up, huffs and starts to leave.

“Fine. If you won’t play house with me then I’m going to break up with you! Maybe Bill will play with me instead.”

--


A/N: And there it is. A new character. Here comes Bill. And of course, when Bill is there, Gabey baby is too. 'Cause they're just a package. Inseparable! <3

Yeah, I am a sucker for Gabilliam && Ryden. That is a fact.

Oh, and also the next chapter is full of fluff, I'm telling you. :)
@iamlauren

Comments

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deadoralive0013
Dec. 30th, 2009 04:55 am (UTC)
FC? XD

This is just full of cute-ness it's ridiculous! I find it adorable that even as a kid, Ryan is reading and ignores Brendon... hehe.

You know, as I was reading this, an idea came to me. If you're considering writing a sequel to this or some ryden fic where they're all grown up, I think it would be a good idea to follow this one up like... Ryan and Brendon don't see each other for a long time and suddenly, (high school, college or even in their adult life) they meet again and their childhood memories live on... Seeing as Brendon's mom had seen them all. hehe...

Anyway, just a suggestion. I'm looking forward to the 3rd update of this! ^___^ nice job.
twistedoodles
Dec. 30th, 2009 04:59 am (UTC)
*gives FC sundae* teehee.

And yes, it's just so Ryan. haha.

That's actually a good idea! Thanks! I'd prolly do that or along the lines of that. :)

Thanks again! <3
I have low EQ, btw. Hence, the early 2nd post. But I haven't posted it anywhere yet 'cause I have to wait for my beta. Haha.
deadoralive0013
Dec. 30th, 2009 05:08 am (UTC)
Mwahahaha... *waves FC sundae triumphantly*

Ahh... yes. While waiting for your beta, maybe you can write some more? hehe... I'm glad you've started writing. I rarely go to SATD anymore so my source of fics is my friends page. But this definitely needs to be posted at a comm. XD
twistedoodles
Dec. 30th, 2009 05:11 am (UTC)
Actually, I've finished til the 4th chapter. And I'm starting on the 5th. Hahahaha. :>

Thanks. :)
How come? I've recently discovered lots of other patd, tai and cs comms. There are a lot. O_O Some aren't as strict at slashatthedisco. It's easier to post there too. I can send you the links if you want. :>
twistedoodles
Dec. 30th, 2009 05:12 am (UTC)
*as strict as
devourlove
Dec. 30th, 2009 05:03 am (UTC)
so cute so cute <3

of course, I'm hoping cute fluff leads to steamy dramatic teens ;3 does it?

lol, even if it doesn't OMG cute xD I can tell the mother is just like *sigh* because you never can tell with kids.
twistedoodles
Dec. 30th, 2009 05:05 am (UTC)
Haha. Yessss. I think so too. But it won't be to the point of someone dying. That'd be too much. D:

Thanks for reading! <3 :)
msbenzedrine
Dec. 30th, 2009 03:00 pm (UTC)
Wow. I've been itching to write some kidfic too. And this one's really good. :D
twistedoodles
Dec. 30th, 2009 03:02 pm (UTC)
Thanks! :)

And you should. It's fun. Haha. It's like a break from the more serious matters at hand. :>
msbenzedrine
Dec. 30th, 2009 03:05 pm (UTC)
I actually just saw my sister's window opened so I checked it and saw this when she left. She's on the phone now. :D

twistedoodles
Dec. 30th, 2009 03:09 pm (UTC)
Ohh, cool! hahaha. :)
You two are awesome writers. And I'm not just saying that 'cause I badly want you two to update. Haha.
helloglasgow
Jan. 2nd, 2010 07:42 pm (UTC)
YAAAAY! IT DIDNT GET REJECTED!
i love this story!!! <3
twistedoodles
Jan. 3rd, 2010 01:58 am (UTC)
Hahaha. YES YES!
Thanks to you! <3
katelynelaine
Jan. 2nd, 2010 08:05 pm (UTC)
Yus! Gabey & Bill xD
This is so cutee
twistedoodles
Jan. 3rd, 2010 01:59 am (UTC)
They just had to be there. Haha. Thanks! :D
onthewindowpane
Jan. 2nd, 2010 09:46 pm (UTC)
Oh my gosh I love it! I love kid fics but this is even better somehow! They are sooooo cute!
<3
twistedoodles
Jan. 3rd, 2010 02:00 am (UTC)
Awww. Thank you so so much! <3 :)
9marchingclocks
Jan. 2nd, 2010 10:44 pm (UTC)
Awwwwww, I just love this so much! HOW DARE BRENNY BREAK UP WITH RYAN?!?! Sorry for that caps lock, but it needed to be done. heehee this is so cute!
twistedoodles
Jan. 3rd, 2010 02:03 am (UTC)
Hahaha. Don't worry, I get you. And well, don't worry, things will get better. A lot more fluff-ier. lol.

Thanks so much! <3
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twistedoodles
Jan. 3rd, 2010 02:05 am (UTC)
Thank youuuu! <3

I update everyday. The reason this got delayed is because there were some errors we missed so yeah, SATD kept on rejecting this. Haha.
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twistedoodles
Jan. 3rd, 2010 10:25 am (UTC)
Haha. The title is Growing Old With You :)
bulpwithlove
Jan. 3rd, 2010 12:24 am (UTC)
lol I like this :3
oh, and NEXT chapter is full of fluff, not this one? Your writing a super-adorable kid-fic. It is by definition full of fluff in every chapter.
(jeez. :P)
twistedoodles
Jan. 3rd, 2010 02:06 am (UTC)
Thanks! :D

And yes, if it is even possible, I think it just gets cheezier and cheezier. Fluff-ier? Yeah. :))
xoneandonlyx
Jan. 3rd, 2010 01:10 am (UTC)
awwwwuh i cannot wait for the next chapter
i love this so much, it's too adorable! lol
twistedoodles
Jan. 3rd, 2010 02:06 am (UTC)
Thaaaaaank yooooooou! <3 :)
drownalltheboys
Jan. 3rd, 2010 01:52 am (UTC)
OH MY GOD, i fucking love you for bringing bilvy in this<3333
and gabeyyyyy.
this is epicly cute, but i hope ry and bden don't break up.
LMFAO at bden calling him a girl.
twistedoodles
Jan. 3rd, 2010 02:10 am (UTC)
Yeah, I just cannot not put them. Haha.
Don't worry, things will get better! And well, Ryry is pretty. In a way. Haha.

Thanks for reading! <3
3xilovefirex3
Jan. 3rd, 2010 04:58 am (UTC)
Oh my god. *dies* I jsut go the CUTEST little picture in my head of mini Ryan shaking Brendon's mom's hand and OHMYGOD! Dying from cuteness. And YAY!!! Gabey and Bill are here!
twistedoodles
Jan. 3rd, 2010 10:32 am (UTC)
YES YES YES! <3
Thanks so much for reading!
3xilovefirex3
Jan. 3rd, 2010 10:16 pm (UTC)
Your definitly welcome! This is getting super cute! Gahhh! I just have this really cute picture of mini Ryan and I have it from two eras. Era 1: When he had his little fauxhawk and stuff. Era 2: The Young Veins. Like, the way he looks in those with the hat and then the string wrapped around him and stuff. ANd it's TOO CUTE!
iloveprettyodd
Jan. 3rd, 2010 01:12 pm (UTC)
aww
awww this is so awesomely adorable lol!! If there's ever a bill there is always gonna be a gabe :)
twistedoodles
Jan. 3rd, 2010 01:23 pm (UTC)
Re: aww
Thankee thankee thanks! <3
Yeah, they're like a package deal. hahaha.
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